Almost perfect! But there can be no wrinkles on the right palm. There is nothing to resist the fold now (after you deleted a part of skin on the wrist). See [link] Also elbow have unnecessary deepenings and right arm have such form as there are elastic muscles. Are they?
Remember what structures you want to remove (skin, bones, muscles) and what you want to leave. What is hard and what is elastic, and how it moves after manipulation, in the new body.
Also another question. Where is the effect of light, that making highligts on the left shoe? It looks very strange.
p.s. i want to slap you now. For this tooms-bums music, that sounds unexpected on your site and going over my music (Manowa-ARR!). Remember very important thing: sites must be silent until I'll ask them to sound!